I woke up in the sun shine and I went to look for food.
I found a stray dog and then I ate it up.
Then I was full I went home in my comfy grass I had a nap.
{Hi cat} I am bigger than you I am the biggest cat in the world.
I saw a person Aaahhh they have a g gun NO DO NOT HART ME {ok} said the human.
I had another sleep because the sun was going dawn.
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Hi Anameka I really like the way you used paragraphs maybe you could add more detail into your second sentence? Stella.
ReplyDeleteGood job i wonder what you can add to improve it
ReplyDeleteoh good job
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